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The Gift Pt. 5

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Admittedly I am sad Rainbow Dash isn't in this one...but I couldn't find a good way to make that work. It seemed best if she wasn't. Also, I tried to hint at her hesitation in the previous page but I'm not sure if anyone picked up on that. I'm not sure what else to say about this one at the moment other than Soarin's eye is in the wrong place and it bothers me. Hopefully you don't find this one uninteresting as it isn't really comical.

Part 1 - The Gift Pt. 1        Part 6 - The Gift Pt. 6
Part 2 - The Gift Pt. 2        Part 7 - The Gift Pt. 7
Part 3 - The Gift Pt. 3
Part 4 - The Gift Pt. 4
Part 5 - The Gift Pt. 5
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JNinelives
I think it's good Rainbow isn't shown on this page...
you miss her, and so does Soarin, and so the reader does as well, because we expect her to be back :D.
I think it builds up tension well.